Here I have collected audience feedback. I have asked for comments on my work, and have received constructive criticism about it. From these comments I have created a list of things I can improve on.
Improvements
- Add more cover lines to my front cover because it looks too bare
- Make the font bigger to better utilise the blank space on my front cover
- I need to change my photos on my contents page so that they are unique and varied. this is because I have used similar pictures on my contents pages. I will take new photographs of different models that are holding musical instruments to reenforce the the genre of my magazine.
- I can make the text on the opening sentence of my double page spread bigger to fill up the space and to draw attention to the the opening phrase. I can also make my image larger to cut the model's legs out of the photo, drawing attention to their upper body and face.
- I can improve my front cover by increasing the size of the masthead's font to make my brand more easily distinguishable on a shop shelf. I can also add more cover lines because my magazine's front cover is quite bare.
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